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Fly, Emote, Fly

Published: Jan 8, 2011

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I decided to experiment with a new shading style for the new year! I really want to do something shinier. Also this could be a new OC?

Critique appreciated

Edit: Made the wings brighter, altered the way he lands.

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BlissfullySarcastic

Jan 8, 2011

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^{HI BUDDY! <3 It's critique time.

'Kay, positives first.
This emote is hilarious. I laughed so hard; the facial expression is absolutely priceless. c:
The new shading style is brilliant. Very bright and shiny, very fun to look at.
I like how you managed to make him look like he's going forward, while he actually stays in the same spot and doesn't walk off the canvas.

Not-so-positives now.
The way the emote squishes is kind of non realistic. It just kind of looks like...it gets cut off. It might help if the outline was a bit darker or if it grows outward a pixel or two. It might also help if the emote's mouth closed slightly, instead of looking like the bottom of the mouth gets cut off a bit.
Another little thing: the wings. The wing movement is barely noticeable (I only noticed it when I was zooming in to check them.) I also think you should also try to make the wings go up on the body when the face goes down and vice versa.

Overall, I love it. So cute and squishy...and I can't stop giggling over the face. xD Love it. <3}