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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

CRITIQUE TIEM FROM YOUR SLAVE, YAY.

Positives first.
Very, very effective static emote. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/> I generally dislike statics because they don't convey what they're trying to or they are completely unoriginal, but this does as its supposed to. And for that, I thank you. <3
Very good shading, both on the emote and the desk/chair. Subtle, but good. c: I like the perspective on the desk, and how you bring it into the third dimension with the little line of light.
Crazyfuntiems. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle"/>
The dream within itself is cute and I can tell the think bubble IS a think bubble (I have trouble with that sometimes 'cause people shape it funny <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt=":lol:" title="LOL"/>).

NOW. Negatives.
While I <3 the think bubbles, the outline color on the top doesn't fit with the background. It doesn't make much sense to me at all 'specially near the grass, where I can hardly see the outline at all, and the background of the think bubble isn't really shaded from what I can tell.
I can't tell the legs of the desk apart from the ones of the chair, if you pixeled ones for the chair. It confuses me. ;~;
The shadow should be heavier on the right of the emote, because the light source is from the left.

Overall, great emote. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod"/> I applaud you for being able to do such a good job with a static emote. Really cute, you just need to work a bit more on the bubble and the lower part of the emote. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod"/>