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Fun With Ribbon by BurgerBunny Fun With Ribbon by BurgerBunny
Ok, so I haven't done an emote in a while due to the fact I've been Chibi-ing a lot recently.

I used a base from `krissi001's base pack for this, thanks Krissi!

Mini contest: I thought of 3 things before I gave him a ribbon. First person to guess the first 3 things I thought of wins some points.
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:iconsteph1254:
I like the idea of this, the emote is cute and the animation is relatively smooth. :) There are a couple of things that stand out to me though.

The main thing that really stood out to me was the ribbon. As neat as the bouncing of the emote is, the ribbon seems to be a bit.. rough. I think if you revised the smoothness and maybe even the impact of the bounce on the ribbon, it could really improve the overall effect of the emote as a whole. Because to me, as it is now it just looks like the emote is jumping with a strand of flexible wire of a pipe cleaner.

The second thing I found a bit awkward was the shadow. It looks great while the emote is in mid air, but I think it slightly 'engulfs' the emote when it hits the ground if that makes sense. Maybe if you have a play around with it a little you'll see what happens. :)

Overall I think this is a good emote, nice job!
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:iconwonderland-rebel:
Wonderland-Rebel Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014   General Artist
I like this emote, it makes me happy.
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:icondark--umbreon:
Dark--Umbreon Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i do that with ribbon
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:iconswirlyeyeshypnotize:
SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My life story right there. XD
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:iconjenya88:
Jenya88 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Seems happy with his little piece of ribbon. :) Lol!
I love it.
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He is! Thank you :D
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:iconjenya88:
Jenya88 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
You're welcome :)
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:iconpeanutgalllery:
PeanutGalllery Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is iiiiiiiiiiit...Flag, rattle and lotto ticket?
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:paranoid:
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:iconpeanutgalllery:
PeanutGalllery Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Am I wrong? :saddummy:
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, you are correct, it's just that I did already reveal it below so I wasn't sure if you'd honestly guessed or just saw my quote :giggle:
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:iconpeanutgalllery:
PeanutGalllery Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay!Where did you reveal it?
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Right below your comment.
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:iconpeanutgalllery:
PeanutGalllery Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:giggle: Kay you got me. I was planning on telling you the next reply. I hope your not mad at me. :heart:
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, not at all :P
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:iconsasuke-pranksta157:
Sasuke-Pranksta157 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010
My guesses: Red string of love, whip and... :dummy:
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Flag, rattle and lotto ticket, actually! But good guess :P
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:iconmedaminebenabou:
medaminebenabou Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
thx
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:iconsynfull:
Synfull Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
Just to let you know this emote was featured in the latest copy of So i herd u liek emotes?? :la:
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I saw, thanx!
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:iconindae:
Indae Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
OOooooo:O I love this
It's so cute, and the movement is very fluid and well carried out!
A definate fave ;p :+fav:

A guess at the three words :P
Flag, clacker (you spin it round and make clicky noise thing, dont know the right word D: ) and a .... cheerleader .. ? :shrug: :D

I love it ;p
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
2 right (rattle is the word) but the last one is not to do with football. Think of a way of winning something...
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:iconindae:
Indae Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I see , flag, rattle and .... hhmmmm... celebrating ? :D
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
something pink with numbers on....
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:iconindae:
Indae Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
^^; The shirts they wear ? The score board ? Umm umm umm ... A banner ?
(lame guesses i know :XD:)
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok, it was a lotto ticket.
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:iconindae:
Indae Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:O I get that now :XD:
A flag, rattle and lotto ticket ;p
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes! But I ended up with the ribbon.
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:iconmaniacalmuffin:
ManiacalMuffin Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
:giggle: I he looks so happy
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:nod: hehe
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:icon1xladedax1:
1XLADEDAX1 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Student General Artist
cute, simple, and adorable!!~ XD ^_^
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:icon1xladedax1:
1XLADEDAX1 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010  Student General Artist
yup, lol!~ ^_^ np!~
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:iconfl0c0n:
fl0c0n Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
Looooool! Here's lil'Indiana Jones!!! :love:
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:iconmelodyme:
MelodyMe Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
Ummm! a bubble blower? thatd be so awesome~ XD (not even close to a football,i know ._.)
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:giggle:
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:iconmaxfield-elite:
Maxfield-Elite Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
Ribbon. :iconraepfaceplz:

Streamers? Bubble wand? Rainbow? (Not a manly word in that sentence. :P)
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No no and nooo! Sorry :no:
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:iconmaxfield-elite:
Maxfield-Elite Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
Do I get a consolation prize?

"Guess the Emoticon: Home edition" perhaps?
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, but you get the chance to guess again.
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:iconmaxfield-elite:
Maxfield-Elite Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
I see the thing about football, but I'm not sure whether you're talking about American football or Soccer.
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I mean soccer, English football.
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:iconmaxfield-elite:
Maxfield-Elite Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
That's what I figured.


Sad part is, I no zip about soccer.


And sports in general, for that matter. :P
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too! But I know that they have these things around the corners of the pitch.
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:iconhadou-ken:
HaDou-Ken Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
Im having fun, nice work. :aww:
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay thanks! I bet you're going to go out and buy a ribbon now!
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:iconhadou-ken:
HaDou-Ken Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
lol no, im having fun with chatting and looking at that emote. :giggle:
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:iconemmadat:
Emmadat Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Uhm, I think I can guess!
Boxers(Underwear in general), a fish, or a ball?
*flail*
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:iconburgerbunny:
BurgerBunny Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nope, nope and nope. Think of something relating to football for 2 of them.
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:iconemmadat:
Emmadat Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Football...

Hm..
Helmet? Football?
And erm...
A flower? :XD:
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