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No matter how hard he tries, he cannot glomp the teleporting emote :no:

Critiques


:iconroblnhood:
One of the best emotes Ive seen in a while. Made me smile when i saw it :lol:

The dissapearing effect is quite good, but one or two frames more on it would make it look better. :P When dissapearing from the right, part of the green emotes hand seems to only take one frame to dissapear, and looks a tiny bit out of place, and i think thats something you should fix :P I love how the green emote seems oblivious to the purple one.

The only improvements i can see to be done on the purple one, is that when it jumps to glomp the green one, there seems to be a tiny pause or a frame where the purple one seems to slow down, or move less pixels to the right. You should also make it look a bit more sad when it doesnt get to glomp the green one. :( The jumping walk looks really good, looks perfect :thumbsup:
Oh and, I love your shadings :iconmr-v:

A fabulously executed emote. :aww:
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:iconmacropus-rufus:
mmkay. 2 part critique... Part one is the actual critique, while part 2 is about dinner, 'cuz BurgerBunny said I could fill up the remainder with it ^^

K, well, I am deeply impressed. This matches the original glomp :glomp:
perfectly. Looks very nice.

In originality, I'd say it is definitely so, just 'cuz EVERYONE makes glomp pics, but NO ONE makes anti-glomp pics XD

I love it.

Ok, now... I ordered Dominos pizza

w00t

I love fake, not good pizza. Garlic. Yum. I might have soda too. Or water... Hmmm.

Norman is delivering my pizza now, according to the website lol

YES! 100 words!

Awesome job, and I LIKE PIZZA!

ooroo
--RK
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:iconmacropus-rufus:
this saddens me. lol poor guy D:

I would write a critique, but I don't know if I could pull out 150 words (or however many it is ><;)...

0.o

--RK

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It is forbidden to kill; therefore all murderers are punished unless they kill in large numbers and to the sound of trumpets. --Voltaire

"My mom doesn't hate you, she just hates everything you stand for."
--My friend Mike
:iconburgerbunny:
Ah, most people just fill it with emoticons or dots, or excessive use of my username - or, in some cases, just about what they had for dinner :P

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:iconmacropus-rufus:
I like dinner!

Ok, I will do that (lol u RLLY want me to? After the real critique of course)

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It is forbidden to kill; therefore all murderers are punished unless they kill in large numbers and to the sound of trumpets. --Voltaire

"My mom doesn't hate you, she just hates everything you stand for."
--My friend Mike
:iconzetsu-luvah:
I feel sorry for the poor glomping emote v.v

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I AM MS. LUCY'S BABY!!
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:iconburgerbunny:
Hehe :P

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:iconburgerbunny:
Sure, I don't mind, if the critique is not long enough :D

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:iconmacropus-rufus:
lol I can talk about dinner forevah!

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It is forbidden to kill; therefore all murderers are punished unless they kill in large numbers and to the sound of trumpets. --Voltaire

"My mom doesn't hate you, she just hates everything you stand for."
--My friend Mike
:iconroblnhood:
EPIC. :iconmr-v:

I love the green one :iconcolongreaterthanplz:

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:iconroblnhood:
I just wrote a critique ;____;

do people really do that? :?

never seen it happen

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:iconteppa:
nooooooo
that's gotta be a nightmare!!!!!
hahaha
i bet all cosplayers at conventions wish they had that technique XD

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guy: what's that?
me: it's a death note
guy: can i write a name?
me: go for it
guy: *scribble scribble* hey does the death note really work?
me: *evil kabuto glasses push glare + evil smirk* do you want it to work?
guy: O_O;...na-no...

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